Hi Michael, some really good content here but as for style, techniques, ICT usage and viewer experience it is below par and dipping slightly into level 2. As we have discussed in lessons, at the moment as you know this is really below not A2 level. • You will need to extend and include lots more to get up to a level 3/ 4. • As we have discussed all information titles to be included are on my blog so you need to revisit that and work through it. • You know and I know you have the ability, skill and knowledge to get this up to the correct level. Look at other blogs in our group for further clarity. I look forward to reading, viewing your newer version. Mrs McD-H
Hi Michael, some really good content here but as for style, techniques, ICT usage and viewer experience it is below par and dipping slightly into level 2. As we have discussed in lessons, at the moment as you know this is really below not A2 level.
ReplyDelete• You will need to extend and include lots more to get up to a level 3/ 4.
• As we have discussed all information titles to be included are on my blog so you need to revisit that and work through it.
• You know and I know you have the ability, skill and knowledge to get this up to the correct level.
Look at other blogs in our group for further clarity.
I look forward to reading, viewing your newer version.
Mrs McD-H
Michael you have tomorrow to update this and add more content at present it will gain you only a few marks.
ReplyDeleteGood luck and pull out the stops to achieve more please
Mrs McD-H