Hi Michael, • Some really good content but I am a very concerned with the lack of media techniques used here. A stipulation in the criteria is to use different styles, video, oral, use of digital technology or ICT in the evaluation. • I am very sure you can add to this to make it much stronger allowing you to reach mark band level 3/ level 4 (16-20 marks). • I will give formal feedback on each post over the next day or two. • Well done on handing in on time:) Mrs McD-H
Hi Michael, great news. I hope you find it easy. Please take a look at Connor and Liam's evaluations for more clarity in styles. Both are high standards in various areas - content and style.
I look forward to seeing you new versions. Good luck.
Still no changes Michael! • I do hope you realise that without changes your grades will possibly be lowered. • Please make a last ditch effort to develop the evaluations and add more content...come on you know you can do it!.
Hi Michael,
ReplyDelete• Some really good content but I am a very concerned with the lack of media techniques used here. A stipulation in the criteria is to use different styles, video, oral, use of digital technology or ICT in the evaluation.
• I am very sure you can add to this to make it much stronger allowing you to reach mark band level 3/ level 4 (16-20 marks).
• I will give formal feedback on each post over the next day or two.
• Well done on handing in on time:)
Mrs McD-H
ok, i agree, i will improve the platform of the evaluation and make it a lot more visually pleasing
ReplyDeleteHi Michael, great news. I hope you find it easy. Please take a look at Connor and Liam's evaluations for more clarity in styles.
ReplyDeleteBoth are high standards in various areas - content and style.
I look forward to seeing you new versions. Good luck.
Mrs McD-H
Still no changes Michael!
ReplyDelete• I do hope you realise that without changes your grades will possibly be lowered. • Please make a last ditch effort to develop the evaluations and add more content...come on you know you can do it!.
Good luck
Mrs McD-H